How has your writing has improved this term? Because I have putting a better picture in the readers head.
The part of my story I am most proud of is chapter 2 because that is the bit I put my most effort into.
Next time, what is a goal you can you work towards? Similes .
Feed back: Good job Harry great grammar and the story line is funny.
Feed forward:I think that you need to work on is paragraphing. J.P.